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Rose Haze Ch.7

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Hazel switched gears and sped forward. As she coasted through the woods, her mind starting roaming back to Smexy. Hazel gritted her teeth as tears welled up in her eyes, “He left me,” she hissed “He never cared!” Hazel drifted to a stop at the rusty gates of an old cemetery. She ripped off her riding goggles and sobbed into her hands. “Why….. Why did he never come back?....” Hazel slipped off the ATV and pushed open the rusty gates. “I cared for him…. He plagued my thoughts and dreams….” Hazel rambled on until came to a certain tombstone. She fell to knees and wept even more.
Smexy followed the ATV tracks, repeating a phrase. “I’m sorry, I’m sorry, I’m sorry….” Tears began to flow from his non-existent eyes as he proceeded. Smexy wiped away his tears as he came upon the open rusty gates. He could hear Hazel’s crying and ran to her aid. As he was running, he finally realized what that feeling was gnawing at him all those months. Love. Smexy never knew he could HAVE emotions. “Hazel!” He cried. Hazel’s head jerked up and her face contorted in between surprise and rage. She stood up tall and Smexy screeched to a halt.
“YOU LEFT ME!” Hazel barked, making Smexy flinch. “Slendy wouldn’t let me leave! He kept saying he was ‘watching out for me’….” Hazel looked angry and hurt, her eyes wet with tears. She storms past him, heading towards her ATV. Smexy follows her, pleading with her. “Hazel! Please, hear me out!” Hazel jumped onto her ATV and fumbled for the keys. Smexy grabbed the handles and yelled, “Hazel, I love you!” Hazel froze and slowly looked up at the towering figure above her, “W-what?....” Smexy caressed her face gently and sobbed, “Hazel, I love you. I have loved you ever since I met you. You are the light of my life and it killed me to be away from you.” Smexy pressed his forehead to Hazel’s and she looked where his eyes should be. They stood like that until Hazel looked down and started up her ATV. “We’ll talk about this tonight. If you say what you mean, come by the house.” Hazel peels out backwards and speeds back into the forest.
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gah, I'm here, I'm awake :iconomgrun-plz:

Right then:
-Time jumping. :icondoctorwhoplz:
-...started roaming...
- Hazel rambled on until came to a certain tombstone / or / Hazel rambled (used meaning both moving(syn. wandering) and speech) through the burial grounds until she came upon a certain tombstone
-“YOU LEFT ME!” Hazel barked, making Smexy flinch. “Slendy wouldn’t let me leave! He kept saying he was ‘watching out for me’….” Hazel looked angry and hurt, her eyes wet with tears. / Technically...Hazel is saying all of this. It's no big deal because most of us can guess that's him talking, but to avoid confusing when another character is talking - their speech is separated. So it would look like this:

“YOU LEFT ME!” Hazel barked, making Smexy flinch.
“Slendy wouldn’t let me leave! He kept saying he was ‘watching out for me’….”( -Smexy hurried to explain.)
Hazel looked angry and hurt, her eyes wet with tears.

There. :iconderpyhoovesplz: